Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, More and more people choose to shop online instead of at brick and mortar store. In my opinion, the advantage of shopping online far outweighs the disadvantage.
There are several drawbacks to online shopping. Online shopper sometime lose the power to negotiate the prices or asking the question about the items due to people cannot talk to the seller directly which means they will probably not knowing about the quality of products. Clothing for example, some people do not know how to choose the clothes due to the clothing pattern or sizes without try on, but all these factors can be solved if shopping in the local shop. In addition, people do not always know if the site is a legitimate retail store which is not save. Some are scam website, buyers credit card and personal information may be stolen when people accidentally type their details on the fake site.
However, I would argue that purchasing products online has more positive impacts than negative ones. Firstly, the online stores are almost never close which is very convenient to those individuals who has no time to go to the local shop. People can buy things online at office or home, it saves people’s time to avoid waiting for long lines for check out and the time for a round trip. Secondly, many online stores sell products at really low price due to the lack of money spent on overhand. Local stores have operating costs like rent, staffing, water, heat, and air that are figured, at least partially, into the markup of the products.
In conclusion, while some people believe that shop in the local store has more benefits, the disadvantages still outweigh the advantages. As for as I am concerned, it is easier and better for people shopping online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'asking' instead.
Suggestion: asking
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, as for, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85284280936 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42530497608 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605351170569 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6038845463 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140017197008 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552983699975 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594377042043 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115182954742 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669050542597 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.