Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
It is becoming increasingly famous to purchase items online, such as books, travelling tickets and groceries. In my opinion, online shopping has more benefits then any drawbacks.
As technological advancements are happening, buying through the internet is also getting common day by day. One of the major benefits of online shopping is that it is time saving. Those people that have a busy schedule in their life tends to purchase things online which are then delivered to their doorstep. Whereas, making time for traditional way of purchasing items is considered an hectic task to achieve. For instance, a person with a fully booked week will always look for an easy way to purchase his groceries which is only possible through the internet.
Furthermore, another major reason for its popularity is that it has provided people to shop with ease and satisfaction. while, they are able to order things that they need are available with just a single click through the internet. The ease of shopping online surely has made it very comfortable to buy things. Nowadays, people travelling purchase tickets directly from the airline's website. for example, online ticket purchasing is less expensive then buying it from a travel agency because it is bought directly online on the internet.
In conclusion, popularity of buying things on the internet is because it has made people's live much easier. In my opinion, these advantages the essay has discussed clearly indicates that shopping online has created a positive impact on lifestyle of people with its ease of use and time saving benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...nion, online shopping has more benefits then any drawbacks. As technological advanc...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...l way of purchasing items is considered an hectic task to achieve. For instance, a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
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Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ple to shop with ease and satisfaction. while, they are able to order things that the...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'airlines'' or 'airline's'?
Suggestion: airlines'; airline's
...ling purchase tickets directly from the airlines website. for example, online ticket pur...
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Suggestion: For
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ine ticket purchasing is less expensive then buying it from a travel agency because ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, then, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.138996139 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71882121326 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548262548263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3977269176 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220236325544 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073606175549 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362401465702 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136075144551 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236693178401 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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