Can the Internet replace the classroom teacher? Discuss your views.
In today's world, without the use of internet, people become handicaps. Because most of the work done by the internet. this has been entered in the education system for the last few years. this essay will discuss whether this development replaces the teachers.
On the one side, internet has immense power and speed to share information between two long distance places. In addition, it also offers a great amount of flexibility. In the education sector, internet is very beneficial. And in the future era, this will replace the classroom teachers. In some area where the education is not reached due to some barriers.so, that time through internet student can get information via an online source. this statement is true for the country india. In India, there are some places where they do not have good infrastructure and road facilities. so, the government introduce internet classes to educate a student. which consequences that the rate of literate people has increased.
Furthermore, there are some online facilities available which through pupils can revise what they learnt in school. it also offer a great amount of information source. The main benefit of learning through internet is, everyone can get a chance to gain knowledge from highly qualified person.there is no partiality occurred.
On the flip side, if the internet replaces the teacher, they will become unemplyed. Moreover, they do not share thier valuable experience and knowledge, too. there are few drawback are present which included, the solution of the problem cannot get quickly. And the discipline of class cannot be maintained while for the teacher it is easy to control the class as well as answer the various problems.
In conclusion, as many may say and I strongly believe that this development is very decisive to upgrade the education system. this also help the nation to increase their rate of educated people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17799352751 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73067062066 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57928802589 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8999547841 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7272727273 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0454545455 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195893400405 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512169385339 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584601446893 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094942083395 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505314390107 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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