Child care centers
It is widely believed that with children of pre-school age, child care centers is the best option to choose. Meanwhile, some parents assume that family members such as grandparents will be better careers for their kids. In my point of view, pre-school children should participate in the class from child care centers.
The first benefit when the grandparent taking care their children is cutting down the fees that they have to pay for the child care centers if the centers were chosen. Additionally, Enormous number of times for shuttling and moving is saved to spend for other things. However, that means the grandparents can barely have time to unwind and enjoy their life. Secondly, with experience from looking after before, it is no difficult for the grandparents to teach their children. The weak point of this is the way that they apply is often quite traditional, and a little rigid, sometimes it is quite outdated. Another undeniable benefit, the grandparents will spread more love on the children and bring them up with all love of parents. Some situations, the coddling too much also make the negative effects on children, such as they become gradually stubborn and not obedience.
I believe that child care center will be more appropriate for preschoolers. The centers provide perfectly environmental for kids to study and entertain because there are a lot of friends at the same age. Therefor, kids will be more confident to communicate with people around them and gradually improve their interactive skills when they were a child. Not only that, the professional teacher who has been trained can help the kids in inclusive growth both mental and physical. Besides, the outweighed point of the child centers is facility which is difficult for families to provide for children when they stay at home. For example, the diversity of toys and the modern equipment serving for study not always have at home, but it rarely lacks in the centers and more perfectly when it combines with their curriculum.
In conclusion, I think with the positive effects, the child care centers deserve our choice and this place is more suitable for children.
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| 2020-09-15 | tangerinelinlin | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: IT_IS_NO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'not' or 'now'?
Suggestion: not; now
...rience from looking after before, it is no difficult for the grandparents to teach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03641456583 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6340423674 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543417366947 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4930635643 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.764705882 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320952384913 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126165713154 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158819730011 0.0667982634062 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25534043635 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600803335696 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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