Children over 15 should be allowed to make their decisions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
parents occupy a pivotal roles in the formation of children. they have to make choices for their kids and plan for their future before they reach a maturity to make their own decisions. Nevertheless, from my standpoint, children over 15 should be permitted to decide about their lives without taking guidances of their family
to begin with, children who are in the developing stage from a teenager to an adult ought to be given the opportunities to decide as their mistakes would still be accepted and forgiven. they are mature enough to think rationally and logically on almost every effect of their decisions. The rapid development of information and technology together with manifold social networks namely Facebook, Twitter and Instagram also assist them in experiencing and exploring the real world faster. in this day and age, children are well-informed about various issues in life thru excessive information on social media.hence, they are significantly knowledgeable at an early age compared to that of the older generation so that they are able to make some decisions independently about their lives. Besides that, they have been educated in primary and secondary school for a long time, which means that they have gained enough knowledge and experiences to make several decisions
. Second, when children over 15 are allowed to come to a decision, they can start practicing making decisions to deliberate as an adult. In this way, they are capable of being trained to be responsible for their own lives before they grow up. if parents maintain to decide for their children every time, they will never acquire the sense of self. They just rely on their parents for every choice in their life, no matter how big, or small it is.Furthermore, if parents try to let the children decide themselves, they will grow up from the mistakes as well as setbacks . Besides learning from the failures , this will also be the bridge of the gap between teenager and adult to train the children to be self-reliant. It is very essential to be independent on their parents and put more focus and endeavour into achieving their targets to prove their parents that their decisions are correct or better. Besides to prove themselves, they understand what they really want and what they interest in.
to put it briefly , children above 15 should be allowed to make decisions about their lives without the inference of their parents on the grounds that they are mature enough, can start to train to make decision wisely and will be more focus on what they are doing to achieve their goals. Besides, allowing children over 15 to make their own decisions will also help them to boost their self-confidence. However, parents can still give some suggestions or some guidelines to lead their children into a right path as most children are very likely to make a wrong decision as they are still lack of experience in making decision.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-30 | sepide1367 | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | martinestefan | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | kiana | 61 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | Niusha | 56 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | lydunhien | 61 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parents
parents occupy a pivotal roles in the formation...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
parents occupy a pivotal roles in the formation of children. they have...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...tal roles in the formation of children. they have to make choices for their kids and...
^^^^
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'maturity'.
Suggestion: maturity
...plan for their future before they reach a maturity to make their own decisions. Neverthele...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss, from my standpoint, children over 15 should be permitted to decide about the...
^^
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 15 should be permitted to decide about their lives without taking guidances of ...
^^
Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...without taking guidances of their family to begin with, children who are in the d...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...ut taking guidances of their family to begin with, children who are in the dev...
^^
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dult ought to be given the opportunities to decide as their mistakes would still ...
^^
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...s would still be accepted and forgiven. they are mature enough to think rationally a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...think rationally and logically on almost every effect of their decisions. The rap...
^^
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...information and technology together with manifold social networks namely Faceboo...
^^
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n and technology together with manifold social networks namely Facebook, Twitter...
^^
Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...witter and Instagram also assist them in experiencing and exploring the real wo...
^^
Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tagram also assist them in experiencing and exploring the real world faster. in...
^^
Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ist them in experiencing and exploring the real world faster. in this day and a...
^^
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... and exploring the real world faster. in this day and age, children are well-inf...
^^
Line 3, column 972, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd experiences to make several decisions . Second, when children over 15 are allo...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...riences to make several decisions . Second, when children over 15 are allow...
^
Line 6, column 446, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...life, no matter how big, or small it is.Furthermore, if parents try to let the children dec...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 568, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...up from the mistakes as well as setbacks . Besides learning from the failures , th...
^^
Line 6, column 605, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cks . Besides learning from the failures , this will also be the bridge of the gap...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eally want and what they interest in. to put it briefly , children above 15 sh...
^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...ly want and what they interest in. to put it briefly , children above 15 shou...
^^
Line 8, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...they interest in. to put it briefly , children above 15 should be allowed to ...
^^
Line 8, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nce of their parents on the grounds that they are mature enough, can start to tra...
^^
Line 8, column 196, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
...y are mature enough, can start to train to make decision wisely and will be more focus ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, briefly, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, so, still, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 85.0 41.998997996 202% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2437.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 488.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99385245902 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70347132187 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473360655738 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 761.4 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6425578018 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.352941176 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7058823529 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31046341449 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121411935058 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852632021368 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239148667326 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889010803646 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.