computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons, Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
that computers are one of the most inevitable inventions in the last hundred year is rather exactly. In my opinion, people have benefited a lot from computers so that they can hardly live without computers.
Since the age of technology, life's pace became incredibly fast. therefore, human himself cannot adapt instantly the changing. that is why computers seem and get involved in a human's life to help them in almost every aspect of life.
The advantage of using the computer is literally showed in communication and contact. but for the existence of the computer, the internet would not have developed and people far from each other would not have been kept in touch easily.
Another benefit from the computer advances in teaching and health services. Since appeared, the computer which connects with the internet has created remarkable teaching methods such as online studies, distance learning, technological teaching and so on. In the medical role, a computer becomes a nurse, helping doctors with many difficult surgeries. Additionally, there is a wide range of achievements in this role, such as, is the discovery of penicillin, or the experiment of finding cancer cells, computers all helping a lot in those studies.
Last but not least, computers make it possible for men to get information from all over the world in just a minute. In fact, the internet gathers news about the world's concern and nowadays, you can get online newspapers right on your mobile phone. However, computers are invented first and then the journalists had the computers type their news. After that, the news was covered; therefore, people can read what information they like everywhere they want, through the internet.
To sum up, I am certain about the advantages the computer brings back to our society. but people should not take these pros for granted, you are supposed to use the computer carefully. The computer with pros and cons comes to our human's life is considered a big present.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07668711656 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68391585997 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604294478528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3902406859 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9444444444 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131530257571 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441679587581 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331924693444 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654754168049 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227936420989 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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