Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In the midst of technology-driven world, computer almost occupied all facets of daily life such as marketing, entertainment, education,... Most of people concerned for the tremendous effect of it will raise the threaten of over-reliance on computers in study path. However, I personally believe that this trend can bring more merits than the drawbacks to educational system.
On the one hand, I opine that the development of computer is a determining factor which help us mitigate some problems in learning. Obviously, there are a range of online classrooms and digital learning tools through the Internet exist nowadays. This format can ease some issue such as distance learning and the breakout of new diseases in society. Moreover, parents and pupils no longer need to splash their money to buy a paper-book because of the many alternative sources on the Internet. And even the number of trees in the forest can be ameliorate which can be seen as the alarming issue of overuse paper. Furthermore, students can access some free websites and easily to connect with their tutor through email and other social media. Finally,
Considering the diverse effect of this trend, there sometimes brings negative repercussion to the society. To be clear, it is really harmful to the learners' vision if they spend most of their time to gaze on the computer screen. Moreover, the blue light, wave,.. from computer can deter the health of users and this raise the volume of people who reach sedentary lifestyles in the communication. Most of the website or digital learning tool run by the support of WIFI, which is make us totally bank on the electricity. Additionally, students may undermine some traditional skill such as hand-writing and reading skill is deterred soon. Taking for an instance, the current report revealed that the pupils who consume most of their time on the digital learning tool have more spelling and grammar errors than the others. This stems from the existence of correcting grammar and spelling apps which setup availably on the computer.
In conclusion, there are some drawbacks mentioned above which can bring negative influences to the society especially the teenagers. However, in summary, I would like to state that the advantages that computer offer to a educational system far outweigh the disadvantages it might have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
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Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...marketing, entertainment, education,... Most of people concerned for the tremendous effect of ...
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Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: From
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, in conclusion, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85581003737 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4505851675 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.684210526 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114521189503 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331653503069 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334350745251 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678175423481 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210855549214 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.