Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
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In terms of science and technology, the last century is considered the golden era of technological invention. It is argued by most modern people that the computer is the most significant invention of the last century. I completely agree with this opinion. I will explain the reasons in the following paragraphs to justify my viewpoint.
In the last ten decades, the world observed multiple technological breakthroughs that changed peoples working procedures, job sector, education and every aspect of life. Amon them, the computer is considered the father of all inventions. Myriad reasons can be highlighted to depict the significance of computers over others. Firstly, computers changed the mathematical calculation system to a tremendously faster way, which helped to operate numerous practical functions in our daily life very easily and efficiently. The coding and machine language which is the basis of computer operation, made the big data analysis and storage simpler. Internet-based online communication systems could be implemented due to the availability of the computer. Computers made use of algorithm in creating multiple creative ideas like video platforms, video editing, emailing, writing and so on. Moreover, computers made space traveling possible which could not be done before. Nowadays, there is no need for paper for writing and sending letters to someone living in a distant place. It is possible to write on a computer and send a message or letter instantly to anyone at any time. Besides, online audio and visual communication system were possible to make because of computers. In general, the computer made our life easier compared to the period when the computer was not available. For example, we can now study at home without even any physical paper book. We can do all the office work and keeps all the data stored in a secure place in a computer folder. This made life lot easier.
To sum up, the world has changed very rapidly since the computer was invented. This change is going on even faster beyond our imagination, where the computer is playing a central role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23055555556 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8760384598 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1177903535 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183986217647 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546709178733 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404159325215 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901095344639 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628813939471 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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