Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There are different arguments about which invention is an essential in the last ten decades. While I believe that computers are the most important creation in that particular period, I agree that some other creations are such as antibiotics also one of the greatest productions.
On the one hand, we have many reasons why computers are vital innovations. Firstly, we can hold a number of articles, books and images by using computers. In other words, in past days we preserve the books in cupboards so it leads to occupy more space in our home. However, this thin computer - hardly 800 grams- holds a plethora of information. Secondly, after the formation of computers, we were invented more things on computers such as the world wide web and the internet. And these are the basic need for people in recent years because if we have any doubts about any subject, we could browse the information through the internet. Last but not least, computers turn a part in our daily life as every organization, public or private, used to work on the computer. For instance, a recent study by Queens University found that regularly using computers or laptops has increased rates by 40%.
On the other hand, there is another new important innovation situated in the last hundred years such as antibiotics. In the ancient era, we treated illnesses by using Ayurveda; however, now we treat illness by using various types of antibiotics, according to microorganisms, which are the cause of the particular infection. Now in this contemporary world diseases also have been increasing compared to past days and also turned into life-threatening. For example, AIDS is a dangerous virus and there is no particular therapy for the illness. The immune system is damaged in this disease and they may get any infections, so doctors survive the patients by giving antibiotics.
In conclusion, although I believe computers are an essential innovation in the last ten decades, I agree antibiotics also a vital production at the same time and it saves many lives on earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00293255132 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89260953199 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568914956012 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5869296612 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1482266466 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492682986495 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435945346784 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966400642909 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286615139024 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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