Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people said that the most significant invention of the last century is computer. In my opinion, although there are many inventions which was shown in the world in the last hundred years, I believe that computer is the most important invention for our life.
On the other hand,it is possible to argree with the statement because of a lot of advantages. First, for students like me, computers helped us to approach with the other study methods in the different countries in the world, especially for the mountainous who can't go to the school to learn. Second,It also made the process of searching for learning materials easily because sometimes, students wanted to go the library to find book, material for serving learning which couldn't be done because of their laziness and business.In the case, their best choice is searching the name of book in internet by using computer, it saved them a lot of time and effort.
Thirdly, the communication was much easier for everyone when computer appeared. People nowadays don't have to wait a long time to communicate with the loved ones. instead they can send and recieve the messages in few seconds.Furthermore, in the past, it was difficult to move a new place and people always lost before the technology: however, now they can open the computers or smartphones to find the road with google map.
In conclusion. there were more and more inventions appearing in over the period with their useful uses, but anyway, computers with the greatest useful changed the world and strong impacted on people's lives.
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- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98850574713 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73608826703 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.0105549929 49.4020404114 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1111111111 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171394138015 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697421368196 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600374156591 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111253917784 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725956340086 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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