Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is undeniable fact that nowadays computers are part of our life. Computers one of the greatest inventions in the 20th century. There are ample of inventions can be taken place just because of the computers were there. However, some people do not agree with this statement but as far as my opinion I am agree that computers is the most important invention for humankind.
Firstly, computers bring revolution in communication technology, particularly, when we see last 20 years communication become faster than ever in the past, now anyone can communicate with anyone from any where in world in fraction of second through the computer, not only voice call but also video call made possible by computers. Secondly, computers make ease of business, especially computers are most helpful tool for business, it makes record data for organizing administration, accounting, calculation and many more, Moreover, computer data helps top management to take decision and run company smoothly. For instance, per article in The Hindu newspaper published last year, 98% businessmen use computer in India to manage administration.
Thirdly, due to computer business grew though e-commerce. Owing to e-commerce businessmen are able to sell and purchase goods from any where in the world. Particularly those online services could connect businessmen to customers who want their product. Finlay, computer make milestone evolution for education world. Now any student can learn their interesting subject by using computers. furthermore, student can enroll themself for online degree courses where they lean and gain high education from home on computer and there are enough examples. For example, last year during locked down due to covid-19 outrage people started online eduction offered by various university across the world.
The seemingly inexorable debete on advantages of computer can keep on going. Nevertheless, showing a deep reverence for all aspects and observing the finer nuance of matter mention above, I espouse the notion of supporting that computer makes differance in existing world in last ten decades.
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- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: agreed
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Suggestion: anywhere
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Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...re able to sell and purchase goods from any where in the world. Particularly those online...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...interesting subject by using computers. furthermore, student can enroll themself for online...
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Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...bete on advantages of computer can keep on going. Nevertheless, showing a deep reverence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46932515337 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89526518696 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653374233129 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.8740837902 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4375 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216092616439 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690463800111 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563599905916 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132883965146 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064786547738 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.