Consumer goods have become the most important part of human lives. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Consumerism is a social and economic ideology that encourages people to acquire more products and services in an ever increasing amount. One of the most pressing concern is regarding the given topic asserts that are the consumer goods have more merits than the demerits. In this essay, I am going to examine this questions from both points of view.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that benefits of considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is the increase in economic growth. Apart from this, the demands of people are increasing day by day as well as the new industries are buliding for fulfil the demands of people that is why it is greatly effect the economic growth of the country. In addition, with the increase in industries; it also increases the employment in the country. Moreover, these products are reliable and easier to use so people want to buy these things and they also acquire knowledge from newly formed products. A survey is conducted by the Hindustan Times where the 60 out of 100 percent economic level increased due to consumer goods.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that infact there are some disadvantages. People often have this opinion because there are some consumer goods which can also affect our health; it can also spoil the whole life. Furthermore, people faces so many problems from these goods because there are some fake products available in the market. A good illustration of this is mobile phone. When the people use a lot of time on mobile phone they can spread from some diseases because there are number of harmful radiations released from cell phone.
As, we have seen that there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however; I tend to believe that earth can satisfy everybody need but not everybody greed. So, they should buy limited number of goods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'effected'.
Suggestion: effected
...nds of people that is why it is greatly effect the economic growth of the country. Mor...
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Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ause they think that new things is much more better for them. Sometimes, due to this reason...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y bought so many unnecessary things. As we have seen that there are number of a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, moreover, regarding, so, well, apart from, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71216617211 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45054636137 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501483679525 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1903515611 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.060106084227 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216651470741 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410298638763 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0429380024736 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296245854833 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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