Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies.
To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements?
In present competitive market, advertisement considered as an efficient method to communicate with consumers. According to latest figures, advertising became one of the essential features of any successful production over few past decades which is due to the fact that ads have some significant impact on people.
First of all, it should be stuck in the mind that ads are best method for communication with costumers. In facts, producers use a variety kind of advertisements to attract the users’ attention. Commentators believe, the more people hear, watch or talk about something, the more they like to have it. When people are expose to visual or auditory advertisement, the possibility they persuade to buy will increase. Based on this matter of fact, all manufacturers and producers allocate a considerable budget to advertisements to obtain more share of markets.
On the other of hand, advertisements are best way to introduce the new and special options in comparison with other similar products. This issue brings a new set of concerns since encourage people to buy and besides,it leads to motivate producers to promote their quality.
Despite the fact that some people argue advertisements are not able to impact people, but plenty of research has been done about this issue and published results indicate that advertisement, especially the unusual and specific ones, can influence the users attitude and change the shopping habits.
Taking everything into consideration, it is clear that advertisement can affect people’s mind considerably and producers exploit of this fact to persuade their users.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...o communicate with consumers. According to latest figures, advertising became one of the ...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...it should be stuck in the mind that ads are best method for communication with costumers...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'persuade' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
...tisement, the possibility they persuade to buy will increase. Based on this matter of ...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
... On the other of hand, advertisements are best way to introduce the new and special op...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ncourage people to buy and besides, 2:37 2:47, it leads to motivate producers to ...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'users'' or 'user's'?
Suggestion: users'; user's
...al and specific ones, can influence the users attitude and change the shopping habits...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, in fact, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45882352941 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16634551883 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8711752869 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.545454545 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118834101762 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475404946305 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350923083748 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670205985894 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158277571024 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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