The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
It is often argued that the global population overgrowth is the largest issue that is threatening our human race on Earth these days. In my opinion, this phenomenon seems to stem from two main causes, but I do not agree that this is the most dangerous problem faced by the 21st-century generation.
Perhaps, the major cause of this rising problem is the lack of birth controlled programs in many parts of the under-developed world. As a result, each household often gives birth to many kids, which can seriously lead to greater burdens on bread-winners. More severely, the young generations of those families might suffer from hunger due to the lack of food or be put out of school. Another possible factor causing population growth disaster is the finance of wealthier homes in developed nations. Due to the abundance of financial resource, these rich parents are apt to have more kids, which in turn create more pressure for the rising number of mankind.
Although overpopulation is a huge problem, I believe that there are more detrimental issues that humanity has to tackle. It is obvious that trash can be easily found in many public places such as squares or sidewalks. This possibly poses grave threats to the life of many citizens. A place with too much garbage is sometimes home for reservoirs (animals that carry deadly diseases such as rats or mosquitoes). These animals are the cause of outbreaks of severe ailments, which directly affect people’s lives, and dangerously lead to death. The reduction of natural resources is also a challenge that people have to face up with. For instance, oil has been exploited for many dozens of decades and the decrease of this vital natural fuel will feasibly malfunction all aspects of society until finding out alternative resources.
To sum up, even though the overgrowth of mankind is threatening our existence on Earth, it seems to me that there are a range of other equally important matters that need to be taken into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97005988024 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75606567852 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616766467066 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9681340448 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168733147131 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515575704839 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600655167029 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939197428471 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684544448501 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.