The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
what are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
Currently, Earth is experiencing issues of the fast accretion in the number of people. From my perspective, it is caused due to the lack of regulation.
There are various reasons which are caused to this problem. Firstly, it is because of low taken regulation rates by governments. Nowadays the increasing population is rising in uncountable pace and this is the definite faults of government authorities which means we can clearly see that around the world there is no any introduced laws in controlling childbirth. Taking one clear example, from some countries such as China and India which are the most dominant countries in possessing the most population in the world. Secondly, looking back to the history we could recognize that most countries patronized each individual by their each born child and this conservative conception is left until now especially in developing countries for having sufficient potential in the labor force.
Furthermore, I completely agree with those who claim that the increasing population is a crucial problem that people are faced. Some people may argue that there are certain global problems that we should put in the higher priority for solving them, like global warming, famine, shortage of food, unemployment, terrorism. If we deeply analyze these mentioned argues we can understand that all of these problem outbreaks are based on the increasing population. For instance, uncontrolled people increasing is lead to the accidental speculations if the governments do not have enough potential for according population with providing with the job and with food.
By way of conclusion, I agree that the increasing population is the most problem that should be solved immediately. Governments ought to take a stage forward by introducing laws for preventing these kinds of problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 314, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rtage of food, unemployment, terrorism. If we deeply analyze these mentioned argue...
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Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s lead to the accidental speculations if the governments do not have enough poten...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34843205575 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01633909657 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592334494774 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4397796947 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135004298515 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521258976512 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504363954425 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716553993641 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300413410854 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.