The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agre that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
It is certainly true that, nowadays, the globally population has significantly increased and due to this human beings faced major problems. I strongly believe that the great deal of issues spread by the upurging of people which people faced. I will delve some relevant reasons behind to this.
To begin with, there are showed a few causes which clearly be seen that.First and foremost reason is that the demand of boy child is increasing day by day. As everyone's wants to hunger a taken to male gender and they trying to more and more times but the bad luck is born female babies so through to this procedure population growth rate is very high. Secondly, family planning method is not followed by the people. Mostly this problem is happened in middle class and un educated people because they do not know about the real process such as a small family is a happy family. Furthermore, older people who believes in ethics and custom they against to born one or two child while, the aspectation of these people is very high related to the children.
Moving to the flip side of the coin, during to the continued rising of the population, masses faced obstacles in a significant amount. First of all, unemployment is increasing due to this, government does not capable to giving the jobs each person of the family whereas, there are seven or eight person in a family. Second of all, less space available in urban and rural areas. Huge part of the land is already fullfill with the houses.
To summarise, the number of reasons are responsible to inclining the growth rate however, due to this phenomenon human beings suffering with different problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...a few causes which clearly be seen that.First and foremost reason is that the demand...
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Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at.First and foremost reason is that the demand of boy child is increasing day by...
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Line 2, column 671, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
... custom they against to born one or two child while, the aspectation of these people ...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'people', 'persons'?
Suggestion: people; persons
...amily whereas, there are seven or eight person in a family. Second of all, less space ...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...amily whereas, there are seven or eight person in a family. Second of all, less space ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78596491228 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51120235605 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1085212846 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151672116444 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447301245246 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054429160774 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083862170523 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185341122844 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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