Countries be extremely high salaries to people from people believe that this country must not do that and make a limit for the salary do you agree or disagree.
Salaries is motivation of people work. Athough, many people believe that people obtain very high montly payment by different countries is good convincing. In contrast another group of thinkers is against it. Therefore, I agree to the given statement and my inclination is justify in the following paragraph.
Out of all arguments, the strongest one to prove is multinational companies provide high payment to their employees for many reason behind it. First and foremost, employees have particular knowledge and fulfilled skills is an irresistible on work in the company for good salaries compare than other members of staff. In addition, another once is better experience and vocational which work groups have some of ability so, anyone Production department give highly wages. It not only provide high salaries but also give many responsibility of Companies. For example, Sundar Pichai is CEO of Google who does handle the all worker as well as take all obligation of company loss.
On the other hand, companies and government should not provide the high salary to their employees. Autority do not give highly wages to their workers because it does not gap between rich and poor people into the companies. Secondly, government might utilise the amount of extra money which is giving to some of them to develop the public service such as Healthcare public, transportation, education and, many more which become a useful for wide range of people.
In the nutshell, my opinion on par with that all companies and government should keep fixed salaries. Therefore, it will not happen discrimination between employers and employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in contrast, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24904214559 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81597987631 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.14373961 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202525781335 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072134201245 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771500003425 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11666151126 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893212621776 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.