Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
The rise of crime among young people has become the concern in many countries in today's world. This essay will discuss the reason for this and provide some possible solutions.
There are several causes from this issue. Nowadays, violent and several content often viewed through television from which children obtain the most information. This can lead them to be negatively influenced to do the same content. Another cause comes from the bad environment. Illegal actions in common places in society have influenced young people to commit crimes such as assault, robbery, and so on. This is because young people are easy to be influenced. Furthermore, young people may imitate their friends who abuse drugs. Drug abuse can hurt young people bodies and cause losing life control. This condition might trigger their-selves to commit crimes.
However, there are ways to tackle such problem. The first solution that I can give is proposing government to do some measurements such as restriction on some sensitive or inappropriate television programs. For example, television can only broadcast shows containing some sexual and violent programs at midnight. Moreover, parents have to educate teenagers the concepts of law and the seriousness of committing crimes. Some attentions from parents like teaching, reminding and preventing adolescents from crimes in order to keep their adulthood.
Overall, it is logical to conclude that the causes of the rise of crimes are violence content, bad environment and drug abuse. However government restriction and parents attention would appear to be the effective solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.452 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74459760256 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9895699941 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7222222222 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8888888889 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276176657258 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786116819223 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599288566581 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170053109068 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608065992981 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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