Some people believe that a person's intelligence is inherited from the parents, while other believe that their environment is the main factor. Discuss these views. Which factor do you think is mostly responsible for intelligence.
It is often debated whether intelligence is significantly influenced by people's environment or is heredity from parents. There
are valid arguments on both sides which I will discuss here.
On the one hand, it is often said the source of intelligence is connected with genetic activity. Biologically, x chromosome, which mother have twice more than fathers, is responsible to bring ingenuity to a child. In addition, the IQ rate of siblings reared together in one home tends to be similar, compared to those who are adopted, which the environment is one condition.
On the other hand, those who says that intelligence is the result of good environment argue that the major factor of intellectual development is the residence. Some research found that children who is raised with a supportive environment are smarter than those who raised in an impoverished environment. Furthermore, it seems that rich-families children have a higher IQ than those who is raised in poverty. Nutrition supply has become the main issue in this case. Moreover, parenting practices such as breastfeeding lead children's IQ to be higher than those who are not dealing with the same treatment since first to fifth months of their birth.
In conclusion, it seems to me that environment has greater impact on human's intelligence because of some crucial aspects such as good nutrition, parenting practices, and educational opportunities. Of course, the combination between this and the heredity from parents would high up a child's intelligence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28925619835 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15973878411 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586776859504 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5157266052 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157483372901 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581030602351 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434983159497 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915063419447 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034521642455 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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