crime is a big problem in the world many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? give your opinion.
Some people argue that nowadays the rate of criminals is increasing dramatically in lots of nations, and this problem is can not be prevented. Personally, I completely disagree with this opinion and feel that the crime rate can be controlled by many suitable solutions.
I believe that crime can be pushed back by lots of measures. First of all, schools should have the responsibility to guide students to know the consequents if they commit to crime. For example, In VietNam, Students will be taught by teachers about the rules of the country which helps them avoid taking part in illegal actions. Moreover, governments can apply rules with high penalties, which makes the people do not want to break the rules and obey these rules effectively. In VietNam, people who transport drugs will send to jails for many years or even worst is face execution sentences. Furthermore, governments should help criminals find ways to solve their problems so they do not need to turn back into crime when they have done their sentences. For instance, Governments and citizens also need to help and support these people as much as possible. This will prevent them continue to commit crimes after being punished and encourage them to mix with the community. Governments should spend lots of national budgets on police standards in order to control the city and catch thieves effectively.
In conclusion, criminals put a major threat to society in many parts of the world are facing. If the government and individuals work together, the rate of crime will decline significantly and block forever in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...controlled by many suitable solutions. I believe that crime can be pushed back ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03396226415 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72719777236 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581132075472 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3335149999 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.615384615 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20007336848 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071705678973 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643671598868 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137046394105 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496187934819 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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