Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. Do you agree or disagree?
Development of technologies influences people’s lives in diverse ways. It is even believed to affect crime rates as detection methods are getting more complicated. According to Russian Bureau of Statistics the amount of security cameras has expanded for 50% in last 5 years. But does it help to prevent all sorts of prohibited activities?
In my point of view, most people do not take under their consideration the advancement of crimes. High School of Economy’s research team reports that rate of internet scams or attacks on computers has significantly increased last year. Nowadays there are many varies ways to steal personal data online. Users are sent with “infected” links that provide a scammer with all the information. Some advertising links are also serving the same purpose of tricking careless or unexperienced people.
Moreover, many digital crimes are more serious than some stolen names and phone numbers. Governmental or military companies also store information on online services, which encourages hackers from around the world to try to get into their secret systems. It may lead to the leak of secret and vital data putting too many people in danger.
Although the safety in some areas is indeed growing, in many other aspects of our lives the level of danger is still high and increasing. There might be less criminals around cities, while it is more dangerous to post information online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun criminals is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ill high and increasing. There might be less criminals around cities, while it is mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24454148472 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82556710174 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698689956332 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.228296702 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.7857142857 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106991259294 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334889472249 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508329306163 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584761892926 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534172816661 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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