The cultures of many countries around the world become more similar than they used to be. What are reasons for this trend ? Is it positive of negative ?
Stepping into the 21st century, it is a phenomenon that the Earth is becoming a global city that has cultural similarities. As far as I know, below are a couple of reasons in my school of thought, followed by its influences.
The first fact to note is that globalization is perceived as the main reason. Nowadays, culture exchange has been promoted in every walk of life. Under the facade of trading activities such as importing media products or student exchange programs, the invasion of cultures has become a habit among each local individual.
Another reason that should be taken into account is the spread of the internet. For instance, with the mushrooming development of networking and online platforms, netizens have a tendency to do similar behavior because of trendy or the same information resources. As a result, teenagers have been promoted silently as the information available in cyberspace presents norms that are derived from around the world.
Some might argue that this tendency brings advantages into modernized life. They believe that it eliminates the cultural barriers, helping people from different backgrounds to have a mutual understanding. This justification is true to some extent; however, its argument is based on one-side thought because cultural diversity declined. Each country has characterized by its distinguishing cultural values, local norms, non-verbal traditions. Meanwhile, people should protect and conserve their own regional identities, long-established customs.
To sum up, taking into consideration all of the above-mentioned facts, it is obvious that cultural similarity is becoming too complicated to solve immediately. Despite some benefits, people should pay attention to its negative effects on our society.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57835820896 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15777257305 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64552238806 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9035745667 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20062069537 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552318098119 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0224234689778 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946979663729 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129099883685 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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