The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the modern society, almost everyone know that smoking is dangerous for one's health. Nevertheless, people still continue this bad habit no matter what. There are a few reasons for this and finding solutions to stop smoking altogether is necessary.
To begin with, some people see smoking as the convenient way to cope with stressful factors. Despite knowing how bad smoking is, they just can't help succumbing to their bad habits. Take my father for example. He is a heavy smoker and he always uses smoking as the remedy to fight sleepiness and the constant stress of driving car for long hours. According to him, no matter how hard he tried to quit smoking, he would immediately think about finding a cigarette whenever he is stressed with driving.
In addition to that, smoking has existed with humankind for a very long time and it has caused a circle of influences amongst people of some societies. Korea is the best example for this. It has become such a strange unspoken tradition for Korean white-collar workers to use smoking breaks to discuss important business-related matters. As a result, it is very easy to fall into the trap of smoking while it is extremely hard to quit once the habit has been formed.
In conclusion, though smoking seems to be a very hard habit to break, it must be stopped by all means for a better health and better society at large. Governments can play a very important role in this matter by enforcing the law about smoking. The selling of tobacco should be stopped altogether and heavy fines for smoking should be introduced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...yone know that smoking is dangerous for ones health. Nevertheless, people still cont...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e knowing how bad smoking is, they just cant help succumbing to their bad habits. Ta...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to succumb' or 'succumb'.
Suggestion: to succumb; succumb
...how bad smoking is, they just cant help succumbing to their bad habits. Take my father for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
nevertheless, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81180811808 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62569916434 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586715867159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4583324534 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269460728644 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970985733966 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050361973091 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173892877976 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633031897959 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.