The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Smoking is considering as unhealthy activity, but some people still keep the habit all along. In this essay, I will explain possible reasons of this phenomenon and two of the best methods to cutting back smoking among our society.
At least, there are two main reasons that make people keep smoking even though they have known the bad impact that would be occurred to their body. Firstly, the cigarette is contained by addictive substances which make the user difficult to halt to use it. Nicotine is one of the substances that give an addictive effect for the consumers in which at the same time brings much bad impact to body. Secondly, there are no alternative stuff that can be replaced smoking euphoria. The smokers try to use a cigarette because it releases some substances that can make them feel relax and enjoy. Therefore, it very difficult for people to stop to be a smoker.
Given the disadvantages that would happen in the future, there are several effective and efficient ways to solve this problem. To begin with, government can create higher tariff for cigarettes, as higher as the price of cigarettes, people would think two times before smoking. Take Malaysia such an example, the legislative had created a regulation to rise the charge while in several months later the number of smokers is decreasing significantly. Furthermore, executive can encourage companies to create an alternative product that much safer than cigarettes today which reduces the hazardous materials such as, nicotine and tar inside cigars. If this breakthrough is implemented for a long run, the number of smokers will decrease both effectively and efficiently.
To sum up, the addictive substances and the euphoria that they get from smoking keep them remained, thus, increasing cigarette tariff and enforcing companies to generate safer ingredients to replace this prevailing products are the most suitable actions to take.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, at least, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18269230769 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74858571905 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573717948718 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.668233364 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181366631726 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620368350698 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040275272876 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113780702829 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411005540544 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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