The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Do you agree or disagree with thí statement.
Many people claim that quick-making decisions are always wrong. For a variety of reason, I totally agree with this opinion.
First of all, people who always make decisions quickly do not spend time on analyzing and thinking carefully, so they cannot comprehend many aspects of their decisions. This can cause that people regret about the past decisions. For example, many students in high school have to make a decision on choosing their major in the university. Instead of being aware of all factors such as their finance, their ability or their aim, they decides this swiftly, after that they are quickly depressed and drop out their university.
Furthermore, quick-making decisions are often affected by contemporary feelings or hobbies, which can mislead people to inaccurate behavior. Therefore, they easily fail and give up somethings they chose and are doing. For instance, my friend, a kpop fan, decided to study in Korea because of her love for idol. After a while she recognized that she cannot learn Korean language and quickly came back her country.
In conclusion, I completely agree that people should think carefully before deciding somethings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'decide'
Suggestion: decide
...nance, their ability or their aim, they decides this swiftly, after that they are quick...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27419354839 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66797249505 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661290322581 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0538851706 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1818181818 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26524843986 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110887840176 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119616383784 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183708840812 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119806401715 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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