Deforestation caused human activity is happening in many parts of the world
Moving towards the 21st century, a large number of people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about the environmental impacts of logging. In fact, it is widely believed that human activities are happening in many parts of the world with serious results for the environment. As far as I am concerned, there has been a highly problematic issue, and this raises the question in related to its causes and consequences. Therefore, some major points with regards to the reasons and effects of this issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are two primary reasons causing the issue of the impact of deforestation on our planet. First of all, it is a well-documented fact that the logging industry exploits excessive trees for consuming products. The most obvious example to prove is that the logging industry fells trees to get the wood that is used to supply the raw materials for an array of products. Furthermore, there is no doubt that increasing the population is one of the reasons for deforestation. For instance, people need more space and wood for housing.
Due to the fact that the extent of environmental damage caused by logging is frightening, there are a number of consequences that could be taken into consideration. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that the damage of deforestation includes animal habitats loss, trees protect the soil beneath them. A clear example being found to prove is that trees loss can affect soil integrity, also home to myriad plant life as well as insects, worms, reptiles and amphibians, and small mammals, rely on a dense canopy of branches and leaves to keep it healthy and intact. Equally important, there is no denying that deforestation is responsible for about one-fifth of carbon dioxide emissions worldwide, making it a major contributor to climate change. This is supported by the fact that trees provide a natural defense against air pollution. They remove carbon dioxide from the atmosphere while they emit oxygen, and their leaves filter pollutants from the air. Finally, it is inevitable that deforestation impacts rainfall patterns, leading to flooding as well as drought and fire forest. For example, tree roots also stabilize the soil and help prevent erosion.
All things considered, it is my strong belief that deforestation contributes to the effects of the environment. Accordingly, I highly recommend that governments should enhance people’s awareness in terms of more responsible logging practices that would help ensure that they are protected about biodiversity and wildlife habitats. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our future generations will be ensured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'habitats'' or 'habitat's'?
Suggestion: habitats'; habitat's
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in fact, no doubt, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26436781609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00331432722 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56091954023 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9998641302 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150271989566 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416423854501 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898592966671 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843778173687 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744390042213 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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