There is an increasing demand for food across the world. I would suggest that this is the reason for the population growth since it has reached over one thousand billion. And it could be prevented by the government’s movements towards this issue.
To commence with, we live in an era of great consume and manufacturing that leads people not only to digest more but actually buy more, spend more and want more. It is likely that half of the world is captivated by lots of variety of stores. Moreover, commercials, tabloid markets, web content ads are only to blame, because it is the last-longing impact on a society, which has surrounded our community in advance to encourage it. The second possible cause could be the tremendously rising population of the world. The contemporary world has 150 countries in it, with more than one thousand people living. Consequently, it is required for more land and more sources.
To end up those problems it is suggested that the government need to make attempts and firstly encourage awareness of people. They could cut off the number of manufacturers, hence industrial estates are one of the biggest consumers. As an example: to make one steak it is required one thousand liters of water as same as for the clothing industry that contributes to the same amount of water shortage to produce one dress. They are proved to be the loss of natural resources and most of the people simply are not aware. The government could do that through mass media and provide some seminars in schools and offices. It will ensure residents to digest food practically and with less harmful effects on the profits and goods that are given to us by the environment. Otherwise, politicians might state the law of the one-child policy, it means they can enforce citizens to have only one child.
In a nutshell, all possible causes and solutions were given in this essay. To not lose our food storage let us be more practical in digesting it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, moreover, second, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83727810651 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74934860558 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565088757396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8193838894 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1200487218 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414357952666 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575258422572 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917878439734 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561655358446 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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