Despite large numbers of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining is gaining popularity in contemporary world .
What problems are associated with it ?
What solutions can you suggest ?
In the modern world, inactive habits are becoming more and more popular even with the huge number of sport facilities. This essay will discuss the main problems that led to this stationary lifestyle and provide some solutions to avoid them.
The foremost problems caused by this unhealthy habit are obesity, diabetes, and severe spine problems. Gaining weight became effortless because people tend to eat fast foods that contain high cholesterol ingredients which are easy and quick to consume. When eating this kind of food without physical activities, people can easily become overweighed; therefore, most doctors recommend an energetic lifestyle with plenty of exercise. In addition, there are a lot of work places that obligate employees to sit at one place for a long time. As a result, physical activities are reduced during work days. Moreover, individuals don't have time to be involved in physical body training. Furthermore, Entertainment industry made everything easier without exerting any effort. In other words, both adults and children are depending on technology to achieve their needs.
Personally, I think problems mentioned above can be avoided by some simple steps. Firstly, educate people about healthy habits through exploiting social media and advertisements. Secondly, promote health benefits and raise awareness of the problem in educational and work facilities by increasing the activities in schools and also providing fitness spaces at work. Last but not least, encourage walking and cycling as an alternative way to go to school or work.
In brief, these inactive habits can cause health problems like obesity and laziness. Definitely, the most effective solution to this epidemic is boosting active lifestyle through various campaigns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in addition, in brief, kind of, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58518518519 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76708063738 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707407407407 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8080519255 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13213398693 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355805930308 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367003644995 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849591261904 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390148174818 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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