In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
Today, there is a growing trend among the elderly towards the increase in life expectancy. This may be beneficial to individuals, while the adverse effects on the young population as well as the society are inevitable. Therefore, there should be viable ways to remedy this problem.
There are several related problems that can be anticipated. The most prominent one is the imbalance between sectors. This is due to the fact that a great amount of state budget is allocated for the rising number of retired people. This means, the money for other sectors such as education and health is likely to be reduced, which can be detrimental to an overwhelming majority of the society- young people. Secondly, the old can be a burden for the young in their families, in terms of economy. Owing to the longer they live, the more fees their descendant have to pay in order to maintain their lives. Money spent on medicine, foodstuff is only the typical example of such financial stress that offspring have to cope with.
In order to mitigate the aforementioned problems, there are several measures can be taken. Firstly, pensions would only be for those who are on low income. People whose salary during their working life is lower compared to the society should be specifically targeted to have pensions. This can not only reduce social inequality, but also can save a great amount of money for the state. Secondly, there should be an increase in the retirement age for working adults. Given that many people who are in their sixties or even older, are still able to continue a productive working life. This can help the young to ease the material burden since they would be economically independent.
In conclusion, there are a host of problems that arise from the escalating rate of life expectancy. Yet I believe that there are feasible solutions that can be adopted to deal with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89408099688 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62400364595 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538940809969 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5433043218 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.6842105263 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226861075399 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724100070978 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440337169962 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142411385 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049387920836 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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