The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The figure illustrates the process involved in manufacturing instant noodles.
Overall, flour is collected which goes through numerous process of mixing, rolling, cutting, forming shape, dipping and packing, all of which completes in eight different process.
Initially, the flour stored in two huge cylindrical containers is passed to a mixer where water and oil is added to form dough which then goes through number of rollers to form a thin plain dough sheets. The perfectly shaped sheet is passed through a cutter which cuts dough into stripes, and after a required length of strip is formed, it is converted to the two circular discs at once. In the next stage the noodle discs is dipped into the hot oil in a required temperature and soon dried once it lifts up from the oil.
The prepared individual noodle disc is kept in each cup and different vegetables and spices are added to enhance the flavor of the noodle. Finally, the cup is wrapped with the well designed labels and is sealed to preserve the noodles until the expiry date. The readymade instant noodle is passed to packaging and distribution.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s passed to packaging and distribution.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96808510638 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55354607467 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590425531915 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8748297 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105710025134 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636363610174 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690749131619 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816381277868 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725191129066 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s passed to packaging and distribution.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96808510638 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55354607467 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590425531915 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8748297 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105710025134 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636363610174 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690749131619 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816381277868 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725191129066 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.