Different people have different approaches to life. Some prefer daily routines while others enjoy having new experiences. Which category do you fall into and why? Give reasons for your answer and use specific examples to support your answer.
In this 4.0 era, people do everything to make a living but forget to live for they ownself. Many people belive that all they need is a peaceful life, a repeated thing to do day by day. However, some argue that life is a journey rather than a destination and for that reason being, they prefer exploring the new things and gaining experiences. From my personal cite of thoughts, I consider myself as an adventurous person and thereby looking forward to new challenges and experiences.
To begin with, a person who prefer challenging is easy to success than the others since they are not afraid of anything and all they want to do is to try their best even though they may get the failure. By this way, they can broaden their outlook on life and they do not feel like the day is repetitive. For example, Uncle went on a train to Paris to find a way to save the country and he was successful. If it is not for his brave, the adventurous spirit, I believe that there will be no Vietnam today.
On the other hand, people who prefer to have the same daily routine can have the feeling of safety and peaceful since a proper daily routine will assist them in arranging their activities in the most sensible way. Moreover, they consider that days only appear to be the same and tedious when they don’t put energy and effort into things that they do each day. Besides, doing the same things every single day is also good for many people who disorganized. However, if some one continue to do the same things for too long, they might do everthing as their habit and probably there will be no creativity which makes them can not get the best out of life and also some people may do things on impulse, which could reduce their work efficiency and productivity in the day.
To sum up, challengings and experiences are the key to make our life more lively. Living quietly is good but if you want to be successful, these two things are a must.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...ny people who disorganized. However, if some one continue to do the same things for too ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, for example, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43258426966 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38801054633 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519662921348 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9315641758 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169085759093 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626329135415 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456415806629 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101411253473 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468548203638 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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