Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country.
A commercial film contains various features as well as the country's cultural values. Even though showing of cultural aspects of commercial films may dependent on the main purpose of advertising, the viewers are enabling to grasp the country's information directly and indirectly regardless with the nature of the advertisements.
Advertising contains may information. Depends on the nature of advertisements, the message of advertising can be vary and it contains massive information. Also, the information that focused on the product varies. Some might focus with the function of the products while others focus on the effects of the products. For example, the advertising for a cereal can provide a huge range of data; the ways to eat cereals, the nutrition values and the effects of the products, but the advertisements are only focusing one aspect at a time. By doing that, the viewers can understand about the product well and which can be different from a country to a country.
In contrast, the nature of advertisement is dependent upon the purpose of commercial film but viewers can still see the cultural aspect of advertisement. In the case of language used, background (environment) scenes and the methods of eating related to the cultures indirectly. However, if the advertisements are related to travelling, then the viewers can get more knowledge about countries. Likewise, the nature of products provide the information about the country in a direct or indirect way which we may not aware of.
In conclusion, advertising has been telling us about a country directly or indirectly. We have not aware of cultural value by looking a the products in commercials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
... not aware of cultural value by looking a the products in commercials.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'likewise', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265993265993 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.111111111111 0.155533422707 71% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0606060606061 0.0946595960268 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0572390572391 0.0501214627716 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.013468013468 0.0437548338989 31% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151515151515 0.122226691241 124% => OK
Participles: 0.037037037037 0.0403226058552 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.14291547179 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.016835016835 0.0326793684256 52% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.148148148148 0.0861772015684 172% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.03367003367 0.021408717616 157% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010101010101 0.011925033212 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1671.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 316.048096192 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21189591078 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39405204461 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.345724907063 0.28420135186 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.237918215613 0.203846283523 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144981412639 0.137316102897 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14291547179 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.037074148 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509293680297 0.56093040696 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.134353688 60.7387585426 81% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2142857143 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0544415665 49.517814964 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.357142857 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 0.814263465372 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 53.7867764206 49.1944974215 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.5 1.69124875643 148% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203437645283 0.332605444948 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.172527147332 0.102741220458 168% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0634656517103 0.0668466124924 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.622588585986 0.534860350844 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168455929757 0.148594505496 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107221911241 0.134430193775 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462929467558 0.0742795772207 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.502200814286 0.324371583561 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.141859141462 0.0638462369009 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151363648701 0.228012699653 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352424243535 0.058150111329 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.41683366733 263% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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