Each year, the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
The number of prisoners increases quickly year by year. This is a disadvantages of modern technologies, nowadays committing a crime is a lot easier than in the past, people can even do that without contacting to the victims.
World Wide Web has opened a window to new online criminal tool market where some products like guns, knifes, swords are alway ready to delivery. Everyone can easily buy and receive in almost one day by several clicks on a website and fill out credit/debit card information. Computer scientists has recently invented many crypto currencies for financial purposes. However, offenders may use it to by illegal tools and put polices in a difficult situation where they are unable to trace cash flow because offenders are protected by strong encryption algorithms.
Modern technologies have significant impact on people's daily life, it also accidentally create a new environment to a new type of crime, where hackers may cause a great deal of damage. The damage is not visible to all people, only victims suffering from attackers can completely understand the danger of hackers. Parity wallet company lost their 150 millions dollars after 24 hours of attacking, people's private information such as account number, tax number, ... are often sold out in black markets.
In conclusion, to prevent criminal activity, government should keep update their laws and predict crime trends to have a better preparation in almost every situation. Polices should be equipped with latest facilities to protect themselves from dangerous cases.
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- Each year, the crime rate increases.What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity? 56
- Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.Discuss this view and give your own opinion. 73
- Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.Discuss this view and give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a disadvantage' or simply 'disadvantages'?
Suggestion: a disadvantage; disadvantages
...increases quickly year by year. This is a disadvantages of modern technologies, nowadays commit...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...y situation. Polices should be equipped with latest facilities to protect themselves from d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83264281747 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.735772357724 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4449143071 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113764223623 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350671370225 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415773767926 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721792950548 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457598586591 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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