The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are some arguments about whether the government should invest money in youth or illiterate adults to benefit the country. In my opinion, I agree with the former, and I will explain the reason in the following paragraphs.
First, the young people will be the future owners of the country. Therefore, to maintain and develop the economy as well as other spheres, the older generation should have responsibility for educating the younger ones from an early age so they can become wise and responsible citizens. For instance, globally, developed nations with prosperous economies also have strong and modern education systems, such as England, Australia, or the USA. Furthermore, because the younger generation's brains are more active, educating them will take less time than educating illiterate adults. This means that the government will save a lot of money, which can then be used in other areas where it is needed. Secondly, the adults who cannot read or write can choose jobs that are suitable for them, such as workers or farmers, which are important labour forces because they can still earn enough money to raise themselves and their families and contribute to the country.
Admittedly, if illiterate adults are educated, they may have more opportunities to get jobs and have higher salaries. This will limit the employment and crime rates, which also contribute to the prosperity of the country. However, educating the young can curb the rate of illiterate adults as well and have more advantages.
To summarize, while lowering the illiteracy rate is necessary, focusing on the education of young people will have greater long-term benefits for the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22304832714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69926876742 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.611521763 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229239608808 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832623210076 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445235645838 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131193664282 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381787626826 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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