Education for young people is important in many countries. However, some people think that the government should spend more money on education in adult population who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many countries mainly concentrate on educating young people. However, there is an argument that adult literacy is more crucial for the government to pay attention and invest more of its resources in. I partially agree with the given point and this essay will discuss why the authority should focus on both sides.
On the one hand, education brings substantial benefits for the young as well as the society. Moreover, the young are the potential workforce, investing in the study of youngsters could bring a huge supply of high - educated workers in the future. In some developing countries, children are unable to be educated due to the lack of money. However, if the nation expands part of their national budget for the development of education facilities, the nurturing of the younger mind could be improved positively . As a result, the illiteracy in the society could be avoided. For instance, the proportion of people who are less than 22 years old who gain more in-depth knowledge could increase the literacy rate in the country.
On the other hand, the adult illiteracy in some parts of the world is very high which results in the rise in crime, poverty or unemployment. The government should provide vocational training for adults as well as life skill courses such as communication or teamwork skills. Furthermore, providing opportunities for an illiterate adult increases the standard of living as the rate of social evils would become lower. Adults would have more chances for job applications and the rate of crime could reduce due to the pay they have for living.
In conclusion, both the young and old should have equality of opportunities in education. Therefore, the government should invest their best for the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ounger mind could be improved positively . As a result, the illiteracy in the soci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1013986014 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80551902823 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5941549334 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277818328739 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089379309795 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480909213973 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158557387016 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393724485657 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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