Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a widespread argument whether top-level employees like CEOs and executives ought to have higher salaries than the original workers. In my opinion, the wage gap is justified and this essay will explain the reason why the top-level employees should earn high remuneration.
On the one hand, the CEO and manager devote more time to the work as they run the business and plan the outcome of the company. The executives are the one who take the risk of any bad circumstances and know how to handle the situation. Moreover, the top employees ought to implement ideas and ensure the workers could fulfill the tasks. Therefore, their job is a lot more strenuous and stressful. To give a clear example, in a big company, a top-level executive who runs the business is given the responsibility for the emphasis of the project as well as taking the decisions that could lead to the consequence of the success or loss for the company.
On the other hand, the CEO and executive are required to have a strong theoretical background which include proven experience and tireless work ethic. Moreover, the top-level management people must have exemplary understanding as well as lots of insight into global economics. For instance, a well-experienced and well-qualified person is the one lots of companies want to hire even with a high remuneration.
In conclusion, it is a rational decision that the top-level employees spending lots of time and effort in the business should be given higher salaries than other workers.
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- Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ployees should earn high remuneration. On the one hand, the CEO and manager dev...
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Suggestion: one lot; a lot; lots
...ienced and well-qualified person is the one lots of companies want to hire even with a h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02766798419 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96141612591 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0755757174 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.636363636 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132195718015 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508062112585 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046328185761 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896792289781 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291918600913 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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