More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Overweight has been a critical issue and has kept on rising seriously in recent year. Many individuals suggest that raising the price of fat foods could cut down on the consumption and therefore the rate of obesity would reduce. In my opinion, I dissent from that solution and this essay will discuss this statement.
Firstly, many people - especially youngsters - are addicted to junk food. Despite knowing about the detrimental impact and the rise in price, the youth still continue to consume it and ignore the health problems. For example, a famous store decided to increase the price of chocolate which contain lots of calories, but the food could be bought at high prices or some people opt for another type of unhealthy food and it resulted in a huge amount of demand for that fattening food increasing. Therefore, public health is still deteriorating and obesity could increase more in daily life.
Secondly, consuming fattening food is not the only reason for the outweigh. In recent day, the citizens live in a fast - paced society, which makes the lack of physical exercises or time for cooking meals at home. Ready-made meals become ubiquitous and could result in the increase in consuming fatty food frequently. In this situation, family plays an vital role in the solution for the issue. For example, children are keen on junk food and fizzy drinks, so parents should act as a role model and they should be warned about the bad impact of eating too much of it. In short, raising the price can not limit the personal choices of food to eat, especially the youngsters.
In conclusion, obesity is at the alarming rate and the rise of price in unhealthy food is not an effective remedy as well as make people live healthier. Moreover, I fully disagree with this view in the solution for the issue of obesity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in short, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81756756757 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51612519484 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0967797908 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246301364174 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805958348037 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05036249423 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153726538265 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475972714669 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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