Some feel that movies and tv shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, several big enterprises choose interview as a reliable recruiting stage. Although there are numerous other possible measures to evaluate a candidate's competence, interviews is still an indispensable round in recruitment.
On the one hand, there are some jobs which require teamwork skill. Therefore, an assessment round is more useful for applicants to show all their skillssuch as leadership or working under pressure. As a result, the corporations can assess candidates’ attitude together with responsibility when working in groups. In addition, due to the high-paced development of technology, people can easily have fake certifications as well as achievements in their curriculum vitae. Thus, assessment stages can help firms evaluate accurately the real abilities of applicants. Furthermore, some companies also have an aptitude tests including intelligence quotient or emotional quotient assessment which are highly appreciated in massive occupations.
However, interviews still have some significant merits that can not be replaced. First of all, interviews are more convenient and time-saving for both interviews as well as corporations. For instance, during the Covid-19 pandemic, Apple - a well-known enterprises recruit new employees through online interviews on platforms like Google Meeting or Zoom Meeting. Secondly, face-to-face meeting can help interviewers assess candidates’ carefulness and meticulousness via their costume and appearance. Finally, interrogations can estimate the desire to receive this job by some certain questions about firms in addition to the positions that they are applying for.
In conclusion, several other potential methods can be taken; however, interview is a key element in employing new staffs. It is highly recommended for corporations to use a combination of those measures to have the highest efficiency when seeking employees.
- Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore students should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum To what extent do you agree 73
- Some poeple think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas Others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own life Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Parents should set punishments in some ways if their children break the law To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some feel that movies and tv shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- Interviews form the basic selecting criteria for most large companies However some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'candidates'' or 'candidate's'?
Suggestion: candidates'; candidate's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uding intelligence quotient or emotional quotient assessment which are highly app...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ent and time-saving for both interviews as well as corporations. For instance, during the ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'enterprise'?
Suggestion: enterprise
...Covid-19 pandemic, Apple - a well-known enterprises recruit new employees through online in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96363636364 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35504116178 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6126083321 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5333333333 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0482834335946 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0177263609335 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0181944369774 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0236332201621 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239401888311 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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