Entertainment
Entertainment helps people relieve their pressure from work and study. However,
whilst recreational activities are getting increasingly diversified, many people unfortunately
find that they cannot get entertained as much as they did in the past.
In some areas, modern technology allows the expression of human creativity to go
unhindered. Indeed, with up-to-date computer graphics technology, some astonishing
special effects are frequently shown in Hollywood movies, particularly in some sciencefiction
works. Moreover, with the invention of the Internet, game lovers across the
globe can explore the fun of online entertainment in a virtual world full of mystery and
adventure.
Nevertheless, in most cases, the overuse of modern technology has made life less
entertaining than it could have been. Take the music industry as an example. Unlike
their predecessors who were constantly exploring life for inspiration and originality,
today's artists are confined to studios, relying on computerised processing and techniques
for their work. As a result, despite the mass production of popular songs and music, we
rarely find a truly remarkable piece. Imagine again those childhood games we all have
played such as "Hide and Seek" or "Drop the Handkerchief". Simple as they may be,
these activities offered us the real excitement of going outside and having fun with
our friends. By contrast, nowadays, an increasing number of people are following a
sedentary and isolated lifestyle due to the popularity of modern entertainment forms
such as watching TV and playing video games.
Given the above arguments, it is reasonable to assume that although modern technology
has made our life easier and more comfortable, it takes away the real pleasure of
creative entertainment.
- Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 84
- By investing in tourism we can earn a lot of revenue and growth in national economy.At the same time it destroys the local culture. 78
- Spending of Uk and France 78
- Some people think that children sould learn to compete, but others think they should be taught to co-operate so they could become more useful aduls. Give your opinion 78
- Taking a year off 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, such as, as a result, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78518518519 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23377240241 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3480195929 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.153846154 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196836008714 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703624530169 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914557261212 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527388979127 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974983047987 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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