The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices is harmful to individuals and to the society they live in. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Some people think video games are an enjoyable form of entertainment while others are strongly against them due to games addiction and its consequences. In my opinion, video games are cam be harmful but they can bring benefits to people and the society as well.
On the one hand, it is significant that video games can bring about several negative impacts. Firstly, since video games are addicted, many young people these days spend too much time on their devices. Therefore, isolating themselves from their families and friends. This lack of face-to-face interactions not only hurts many real-life relationships but also increases the risk of mental health issues among the youth. Secondly, when people waste larger amounts of time on video games, they tend to be less physically active which can eventually lead to a society of people leading sedentary lifestyles. Lack of exercise over a long period time makes people vulnerable to metabolic diseases such as obesity and causing the deterioration of health.
On the other hand, the availability of entertainment on handheld devices is advantageous to many ways. Whereas educational games are helpful for students, especially those with special needs. They can learn about the outside world, sounds, music, languages, history, etc. Some mobile games can be used in classroom to engage students and improve their learning. Moreover, game designing and game developing have become popular professions since the last decade. For example, the father of Flappy Bird has mage thousands of dollars from it. Many talented young people are earning a large amount of money from competing, playing and making games.
In conclusion, playing games can be addictive and distractive to other real life activities. However, I believe there are ways to limit the time of playing games and reduce health risks so that video games can serve better educational and entertainment purposes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31475409836 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74047371522 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626229508197 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7573265148 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3529411765 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2352941176 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195011144279 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633105816254 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584848327497 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130761209353 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415708555483 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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