Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that only authorities have the power to solve environmental problems that seriously threatens to today’s world. However, protecting the earth is the responsibility of both authorities and individuals.
It is true that only the government have some say in appealing the efforts and cooperation of politicians and large organizations to deal with some serious environmental issues such as global warming, prolonged droughts, violent storms and other extreme weather events. This is because solving such problems acquires sophisticated equipments, the use of modern technological devices and enormous experienced scientists to work together. For instance, it takes years for environmentalists to collect various samples and analyse huge amount of data to know the major cause of global warming and to help them find the most effective solutions to tackle this one. Only the government can have sufficient funds and resources to invest in this.
On the other hand, I think that the responsibility of individuals plays a crucial role in protecting environment. Owing that individuals can join hands with politicians to save environment by a variety of ways such as enjoying renewable product, limiting the consumption of plastic, using more energy-efficient household items or planting more trees. Unless both the government and individuals take responsibility for environmental protection, this issue will not be thoroughly addressed. The responsibility cannot blame on one angle, even the government or individuals, therefore this change which have to come from both angles will gain some obvious result. Take deforestation as an example, although the authorities enact law to prohibit it, farmers continue burning forests for their own purposes.
In conclusion, I believe that with efforts of all inhabitants in the world including individuals of social organizations and the authorities, environmental protection will have breakthrough in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urning forests for their own purposes. In conclusion, I believe that with effor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75085324232 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38696922494 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3866031598 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.416666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160047000973 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668523707111 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644266303778 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101847485076 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503623380846 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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