Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that protecting the environment is responsible for only politicians. From my viewpoint, I totally disagree with this statement as individuals take an important role in reducing harmful products and making the world better.
Noticeably, billions of tons of plastic are released into the environment each year. Thus, if people stop using these harmful objects, no company will produce them. As a result, more and more manufactures will be removed from cities, reducing tons of emission gases and making the air fresher. Nevertheless, rivers and seas will no longer be affected by polluted water discharged from factories, saving the sea environment. In other words, if individuals join to protect the environment, everything can be changed positively.
Stop using plastic may not be the only way for normal people to save the Earth as we can afforest and make the world greener. Many people planted trees when they were world greener. Many places have become jungles. So if each person starts to plant trees right now, we will have millions of hectares of forests in the next 20 years. Not only the atmosphere will be improved, but also the natural habitats, saving species from going extinct.
In conclusion, saving the Earth is the responsibility of every person and politicians cannot handle it without the power of citizens. Therefore, governments should raise people’s awareness of saving the environment as it is the most effective measure to save our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23849372385 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83822060934 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63179916318 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9583069954 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4285714286 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10005264258 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365770955283 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057848985474 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655688130828 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430452434637 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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