In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or products from animals such as medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that humans will soon replace products from animals in their daily lives. From my viewpoint, I do agree with this statement because of the existence of artificial food and health problems in recent years.
Nowadays, thanks to advanced technology, people can produce meat from trees and some beans. So, we do not need to kill animals or destroy natural habitats to get food but instead, save the environment. We can also control the amount of nutrition in what we eat, and balance it based on individual needs. Thus, using edible food is more effective when we can control not only our own lives but also create a better world for every creature on this planet.
On the other hand, animals sometimes contain some types of diseases that we have no clue about so eating them may cause a huge problem for our health. For instance, in 2019, a group of people eats sick bats and resulting in the covid pandemic in the world a period of time later. Not only that, in some countries, industrial animals are often raised in a filthy environment or fed unclean food, so they may get a lot of sicknesses. So using these food in our lives is leading to unforeseeable consequences, especially for our health. In the long run, humans will become weaker and our immune system will be more fragile against viruses, leading to the possibility of sicknesses.
In conclusion, food from animals is too dangerous for our lives as they contain some risks of getting diseases. Therefore, governments and scientists should invest in the technology of producing edible food from healthy ingredients to maintain a better world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ng in the covid pandemic in the world a period of time later. Not only that, in some countries...
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Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...y may get a lot of sicknesses. So using these food in our lives is leading to unforeseeabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85611510791 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6263131634 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60071942446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.0212148107 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.846153846 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241368325185 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874436844561 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489640857324 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163013628586 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483582984624 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.