Even though governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the healthcare system, the overall standard of physical health in developed countries is decreasing. What are the potential reasons for this, and what are some of the long-term effects?
Nowadays, although there are countless advancement in science, technology and human society, the deterioration in citizens’ health in wealthy nations has been a matter of great concern. Physical problems such as cardiovascular diseases, obesity,…. are becoming more and more prevalent in these countries.Hence, understanding existing reasons as well as potential long-term impacts are necessary. This essay will explain the reasons, along with the long-lasting effects of this trend on individuals.
One of the prominent reasons for such problem happening in wealthy countries is due to the terrible lifestyle individuals are having. Firstly, the fast-paced life and competitive work atmosphere have almost made every resident a workaholic. People are all wrapped up with their jobs and as a consequence, they have little time to take care of themselves. Therefore, they become more susceptible to stress which greatly affect their work-life balance and can result in serious health issues like anxiety or depression. Additionally, the blooming of technology and advanced societies is also to blame. The fact that individuals nowadays are in closer contact to smart home devices which make their life easier has spawned a sedentary lifestyle community, becoming more physically inactive and more likely to catch chronic diseases. For instance, the arrival of cleaning robots has made more and more people take chores as given, which leaving bones and muscles untrained then getting weak and degenerating.
Nevertheless, these lifestyle choices will have irreversible repercussions to not only their own family but also the society. Regarding the former, if generation keep on partaking the aforementioned unhealthy habits, their descendants will become prone to suffer from unwanted illnesses. For example, the offspring, affected by their careless parents who either are work-obsessed or take couch potato into daily routines, will just imitate those behaviours, thus passing those down to even later generations. With consideration to the latter, these lifestyles can cause increased requests for health-care services, consequently rocketing the costs of it and be unaffordable to ordinary citizens.
In conclusion, the awful lifestyles, competitive job atmosphere and fast-paced culture are certainly to blame for the declining of public health and I am convinced that this phenomenon has a number of negative implications for family and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78512396694 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1516692636 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6391184573 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6287453242 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.25 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142071505662 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440107866677 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315028598417 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876856740994 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303426311462 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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