Even though governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the healthcare system, the overall standard of physical health in developed countries is decreasing. What are the potential reasons for this, and what are some of the long-term effects?
There is a well-known fact that ,even though they have high-quality health care systems in rich nations , the levels of physical health of their communities trending negatively. A sedentary lifestyle and unhealthy meal patterns are the main reasons for this development and this can lead to some long term problems like decreasing workforce and increased health-related budget. In the following essay , this writer going to discuss more on these facts.
When we consider the reasons for these poor health habits , the work pattern of the citizens comes first . Unfortunately , most of the communities have engaged with jobs , that require very minimal physical work and with the development of technology ,these populations have further been confined in front of computers leading to a sedentary lifestyle. Furthermore , with their busy ,lifestyle they tend to eat foods that contain high levels of sugar and salts ,and ultimately all these bad habits have led to a storm of non-communicable diseases. To illustrate this, a well-known health magazine recently published an article , which shows the main reasons for current epidemics of non-communicable disease is poor physical activity and poor meal pattern of the people .
Even though these health conditions can treat , most of them have serious long term effects. Whenever a person developed a non-communicable disease like diabetes , their physical and mental abilities can affect negatively and eventually lead to reduce work-related productivity. Furthermore , making matters serious they should be on lifelong medications and ultimately all these factors will lead to major drawbacks to the workforce and the health budget of the country. for instance , one of the health care experts in Europe has forecast that in 2030, 75% of people more than 30Y will be on long term medications for one of the chronic diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, well, as for, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42268041237 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02499255968 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6985815356 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.454545455 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 44.0 5.01903807615 877% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247610961828 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989285829016 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628390673331 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185929986724 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565983079579 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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