Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today.
Science and technology is a boon to mankind. The fact that humans have moved from Stone age to the current technological age has shown us the significant role played by science and technology. During this era, along with the good things, came plastics, pollution which had an adverse effect on the environment, causing devastating effect on flora and fauna. Some even argue that Global Warming is caused by advancements in technology. Despite all this, I strongly believe that technology will eventually able to solve today's environmental problems because history has shown us from time to time that the problems once thought to be impossible to solve have been solved by technological advancements.
Firstly, the amount of poisonous gasses, residues released by many Industries is causing air pollution and water pollution. With deforestation, the amount of Carbon-di-oxide is increasing, which is the main cause of Global Warming. Due to which the icebergs in the polar regions are melting, resulting in raising the level of seawater. The water cycle has changed in many regions like India. For instance, during the rainy season is people are facing draught and not able to cultivate crops. I believe that even though we are responsible for this mess, advancements in technology will one day be able to solve or mitigate pollution. Like if we were able to utilize renewable energy sources like Solar energy, Wing energy, etc,. for power generation instead of using coal, we can reduce air pollution by greater amount. Utilizing atomic energy can also be very useful. With advancements in biotechnology, we can breed organisms that can degrade the harmful pollutants into organic manure and can be used for agriculture.
Secondly, the invention of plastic has more disadvantages than advantages. Plastic is nondegradable. Even if we burn it, it will only get deformed and residue will remain as is. This is having an adverse effect on animals that eat it. With the amount of plastic production increasing more than ever, and lacking the ability to degrade it, the environmental problems will be compounded. With technological advancements, nowadays we are able to produce products using naturally available things like paper which can substitute plastics covers, bags etc, with one step at a time, one day we will find a solution to degrade plastics.
With all the above examples I believe that technology is the key to unlock most of the environmental problems that we are facing today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2101.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21339950372 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94807253118 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9244508595 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3181818182 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212889156906 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554978829146 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917514293706 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174404164679 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106918175008 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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