Every year languages die out.Some people think this is not important because the life will be easier of there are fewer languages in the world.
Many people believe that , disappearing of the languages around the world it is not significant. However , others oppose this point of view.
This essay will take a closer look at the matters , showing my opinion and giving fair reasons to support it.
On one hand it is true to say that he disappearing of languages could lead us to easier way of living.
Firstly, the decreasing of the languages kind genuinely will make the world better place. The communication will become easier with the people around the world.
Secondly , the usage of a fewer ways of communication will contribute to the human kind by sharing easily variety of methods for improving: technologies ,environmental issues , different ways of household and could bring world peace .
On the other hand the fore mentioned might not be completely true.
Firstly, with the usage if less languages , people would always find way of codify they secrets which this will led to dissatisfaction among the members of society.
Third , there always will be problems even of using one language. For example, even people from one country who are speaking one language still can understand each other on 100%
In addition , there are lots of languages around the world and still people always will find way of translating , showing or sending significance information by one or another way. Hence with one language the information might be misunderstood.
In conclusion, there are evidences proving that claims are true , yet I am included to agree with the first one mentioned
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, third, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15139442231 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83736720264 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.235753273 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274857180064 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106899393401 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593458569728 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113816253892 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713315463291 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.