Every year several languages die out . Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world .
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion .
Nowadays , languages become an obstacle which makes people find it difficult to connect and interact with others . And that lead to a question whether reducing a number of uncommon languages will help people have a life more easier or not . In my opinion , I believed that it is benefical for the world if we just need to have a couple main languages in our society .
It is true that every year , many languages have been disapeared in our world and it is easy to understand why they die out . Firstly , people find it easier to study an international language like English than the languages are not common in general public . Secondly , there are some kind of languages which only use in a particular area or several small groups ,and it link to people who want to learn those language will struggle to find a place to learn them . As the result , those languages will be eliminated by the human .
Beside that , by getting rid of those uncommon languages will bring many benefits for people’s life . First of all , people can be comfortable connecting with others because of using the international languages . Secondly , people do not need to invest too much on studying a new languages while they already have a major languague to communicate . Lastly , the economic of the world will run smoothly and people are more happier in their life .
In conclusion , there still have many arguments about this topic . But in fact , it will be more better if there has only a few languages in the world .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, in fact, in general, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72972972973 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60003919751 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559845559846 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.499978561 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2307692308 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383434335736 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139116890532 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357397451854 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231700102689 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412391790124 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.