Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
Human beings are responsible for a great deal of environmental damages. But we can take steps to reduce environmental problems that we are causing. This essay will discuss environmental problems and also the measures that governments and individuals can take to tackle these problems.
Two of the biggest threats to environments are air pollution and waste. Firstly, air pollution has increased in last decades by factories and vehicles which devastate our planet and causes global warming. Secondly, by increasing population, production of waste has increased dramatically which contaminate air, oceans and rivers.
Moreover, governments can mitigate these issues by advertising public transportation instead of private transportation. They can improve liability and convenience of public transportation to encourage individuals to use buses and trains. Secondly, giving some additional funds to markets to produce reusable bags and proposing them to customers, is another beneficial step that governments can implement to help environment. Finally, governments should force factories to use reusable energy such as solar, wind, and water power.
Apart from the government, people who are concerned with environmental issues can partake in air pollution and waste problems. People should try to use public transportation to help to minimize the amount of exhaust fumes which cars enter to the air. Individuals can separate dry and wet waste at home and help to decrease the amount of household waste which enters our globe. Also they can use some reusable bags in their fridge, and use their cloth-made-bags when they go to shopping.
In conclusion, people deteriorate the environment with the high usage of private cars and industrial waste. Both governments and individuals should take some actions to address environmental issues.
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... Fuji75 on Wed, 11/09/2016 - 10:11 It is true that humans are causing irrep...
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Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...uals can do to significantly reduce the earths pollution. Firstly, we can use energy i...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s pollution. Firstly, we can use energy in an efficient way, we need to turn off all electronic and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13870967742 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93418534819 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616129032258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0726280665 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392129467436 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152984524718 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200753596581 0.0667982634062 301% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232044025481 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.346253856318 0.056905535591 608% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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