Human beings are responsible for a great deal of environmental damages. But we can take steps to reduce environmental problems that we are causing. This essay will discuss environmental problems and also the measures that governments and individuals can take to tackle these problems.
Two of the biggest threats to environments are air pollution and waste. Firstly, air pollution has increased in last decades by factories and vehicles which devastate our planet and causes global warming. Secondly, by increasing population, production of waste has increased dramatically which contaminate air, oceans and rivers.
Moreover, governments can mitigate these issues by advertising public transportation instead of private transportation. They can improve liability and convenience of public transportation to encourage individuals to use buses and trains. Secondly, giving some additional funds to markets to produce reusable bags and proposing them to customers, is another beneficial step that governments can implement to help environment. Finally, governments should force factories to use reusable energy such as solar, wind, and water power.
Apart from the government, people who are concerned with environmental issues can partake in air pollution and waste problems. People should try to use public transportation to help to minimize the amount of exhaust fumes which cars enter to the air. Individuals can separate dry and wet waste at home and help to decrease the amount of household waste which enters our globe. Also they can use some reusable bags in their fridge, and use their cloth-made-bags when they go to shopping.
In conclusion, people deteriorate the environment with the high usage of private cars and industrial waste. Both governments and individuals should take some actions to address environmental issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69927536232 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17373725607 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8791336621 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.3125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277091372825 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906245139506 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617835787268 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151711735055 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700973261241 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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